Date: 01/26/2012 10:20 AM Title: Of Dreams
I understand. You write very well. I like the playfulness of this series. I've read the others as well.
Author's Response: I thank you for your kind words and actually having gone and written the last chapter today I have gone with your suggestion and added a little extra and I believe there will be one more story in the series after this one. I've finally relocated my muse as of the other day and *fingers crossed* doesn't seem to be letting go any time soon.
Date: 01/25/2012 2:51 PM Title: Of Dreams
I'm glad to see this new chapter! It's cute!Have you thought about them having another child?
Author's Response: I actually haven't thought of that...I was thinking after the next chapter, which will close out this story, that I would hang the series up since not many people seem interested in it and there are so many other stories I want to write.
Date: 11/08/2011 12:11 AM Title: Our Soul
You made my Heart all a Flutter. So much Love and Beauty. Can never have to much of either. Just Sublime. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
Author's Response: I'm glad this piece was able to instill such things while you read it. Thanks for the review and for taking the time to read it.
Date: 10/25/2011 10:48 AM Title: Our Soul
Your storise like lyric adagio or classical watercolor paintinga292;gentle and poetic.
Thank you .
BTW:Nice meet you ,little Ariana S'chn T'gai Kirk. In future,someone will cry for you ,for two most terrible father-in-laws in universe.
Author's Response: Wow thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you see it in the light you do since I was unsure of the reception these stories would be met with. And lol at the two most terrible father in laws. =D
Date: 10/24/2011 11:00 PM Title: Our Soul
wOw The baby is born. You have such a beautiful vocabulary when you describe what is happening in a scene. Especially when you have the experience of living in a place that has four seasons. And you did a great job doing just that with your two chapters.
Being pregnant is an amazing experience, and it is something that unfortunately men have yet to experience. But what if one day it could be true...I truly believe they would never be the same after that. Love the caring nature Spock shows Jim. Love the reference to Friday's Child.
Great job with this...anxiously awaiting the next chapter...
Author's Response: I love the four seasons and wanted to do them justice so I made sure to take my time describing them. I really enjoy the idea of men having children especially if they are in this kind of relationship and want children. It would be interesting to see how they react and how they do with it on the whole. I myself have never been pregnant so most of what I am describing was told to me by mother which gives it that realism since otherwise I would be shooting in the dark. I'm glad you've liked what I've written and posted thus far; I really love writing Spock this way since I can so easily see him being like this especially with Jim in the room. ;) Thanks for the review it means a lot to me.
Date: 10/23/2011 6:32 PM Title: Where the Heart Is
I love this series... So Far! And, I would love a prequel fic describing the conversation and the atmosphere when they first talked about having an implant put in so that they could conceive!
That's a good idea. I might try and flesh that idea out. ^_^
Date: 10/23/2011 6:04 PM Title: Where the Heart Is
Hope that this, being a work in progress, won't go sour at any point, storyline wise... Like it all mellow and fluffy like this!
I'm trying to keep the tone the same through out the stories that will be in this series. So hopefully it doesn't change in any of them.