Date: 09/09/2011 9:25 AM Title: Live on the SENN Channel
Wow, a story within a story this was lovely. So well written, I'd like to read the entire story that Jim was enjoying.
Jim's loneliness was palpable, and heartwrenching. I hope Scotty is only going to use his superpowers for good.
To quote Oliver Twist. "Please sir, I want some more."
Wow a quote from Oliver Twist! Very nice. And yes there is more to come and there is another fic that you can read that is complete. It is this same story from Spock's POV and it s much quicker and more smutty than this one, but does have some good emotional angst.
Date: 01/30/2011 10:42 AM Title: The SENN Channel Presents
That was great! Jim's POV would be wonderful fun particularly reagrding the ending of this chapter. I should have known or at least guessed. I was certain it was Jim all along. Wonderful writing. Thank you!
Date: 01/29/2011 7:22 PM Title: The SENN Channel Presents
It was all Bones and Scotty! Too funny.
And I'm glad there was such a hot, satisfying end. I would love to see this story from Jim's POV as well, but I totally understand if your muse goes elsewhere.
Date: 01/29/2011 4:09 PM Title: The SENN Channel Presents
Incredibly hot. I have only one minor quibble. I don't think Spock would pick Jim up and bodily haul him out of the mess hall. he might say "Captain, we need to confer." He might invent an emgerency to get Jim moving. But Tarzan in front of the crew? Nope.
Other than that, excellent job.
Date: 01/10/2011 1:27 PM Title: The SENN Channel Presents
Iīve just been reading your story for the third time, LOVE it so much, especially part 2 with Jim dancing. Itīs really amazing! I didnīt recognize the dance moves, so I went onto YouTube as you suggested and watched Lady Gagaīs "Alejandro"-video. OK, that did it.
Now I keep watching this video the whole day imagining Jim Kirk in one of those black booty shorts dancing. Guh... HOT. HOT. HOT.
OMG whereīs my brain *facepalm* lost it somewhere between chapter 2 and 4 I think.
Iīm dying here for more, so please please have mercy and update soon.