Pon Farr hits Spock's HOT body while he and Jim are trying to discreetly make it home to safety aboard Enterprise...
It took me nearly a whole day to figure out what one of the people who sent me feedback meant, because English is not their first language. I couldn't speak their language at all, so I won't moan. I think they were going on about me not using speech marks. Well, that's because the conversation isn't vocalised. It's through touch telepathy. I know there is an argument to say that it should still be surrounded by speech marks, but, how then, would you tell the difference between the out-loud talking, and the communicating via joined minds/thinking? If I could get the options/formatting in the text box to recognise 'Italicised' segments, I would - Yet, can I do that without having to go through my whole story when it's in the text box??
NoneGenres: Kirk/Spock SlashOther Languages:
NoneStory Type: Erotica
, RomanceTrope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
, Bottom Spock
, Pon FarrUniverse: Abrams Universe
, AU Alternate Universe
, ST:TOS Original UniverseWarnings:
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